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2017年高考全国1卷英语作文范文及赏析一 (900字)

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2017年高考全国1卷英语作文范文及赏析一
  Dear Ieslie,
  As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend .Considering our students are preparing for their final exam,I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.
  The mainly course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang Dynasty.It's universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talent poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study.
  Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It's the society that creates the brilliant poem.
  Yours
  Li Hua.
  点评:本文要点覆盖较全面,文章结构清晰,语法错误较少,长短句运用合理,结合了简单句同时运用了较多的复杂句式,如主语从句It’s universally acknowledged that…,强调句型It's the society that…非谓语结构作状语Considering our students are preparing for…等等;同时恰当使用了一定的高级词汇如solid foundation,broaden one’s horizons等。
  建议:1 文章要点方面,建议时间更精确些,比如下周周几几点到几点;2 语法方面,注意细节语法的错误,比如mainly改成main,poem改成poems等。

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